Thursday, October 24, 2013

Dialectical Journal Format




You will compose and post two Dialectical Journals per Act of Romeo and Juliet.

The Right Way to Use Shakespearean Quotes


FORMAT: MLA HEADING
                  "Original Shakespearean Quote." (act.scene.lines) (i.e., 2.1.74-78)
                   Analysis (150-200 words)




Ima Student
English I, 2nd
Rodrigue
01 January 2014


O Romeo, Romeo, wherefore art thou Romeo?
Deny thy father and refuse thy name,
Or if thou wilt not, be but sworn my love,
And I’ll no longer be a Capulet. (2.1.74–78)


Juliet speaks these lines, perhaps the most famous in the play, in the balcony scene (2.1.74–78). Leaning out of her upstairs window, unaware that Romeo is below in the orchard, she asks why Romeo must be Romeo—why he must be a Montague, the son of her family’s greatest enemy. Still unaware of Romeo’s presence, she asks him to deny his family for her love. She adds, however, that if he will not, she will deny her family in order to be with him if he merely tells her that he loves her.A major theme in Romeo and Juliet is the tension between social and family identity (represented by one’s name) and one’s inner identity. Juliet believes that love stems from one’s inner identity, and that the feud between the Montagues and the Capulets is a product of the outer identity, based only on names. She thinks of Romeo in individual terms, and thus her love for him overrides her family’s hatred for the Montague name. She says that if Romeo were not called “Romeo” or “Montague,” he would still be the person she loves. “What’s in a name?” she asks. “That which we call a rose / By any other word would smell as sweet” (2.1.85–86).


21 comments:

  1. Lexi Bourgeois
    English 1-5th Period 1st DJ
    Wade Rodrigue
    5 November 2013


    Alas, that love, whose view is muffled still,
    Should, without eyes, see pathways to his will!
    Where shall we dine?--O me! What fray was here?
    Yet tell me not, for I have heard it all.
    Here's much to do with hate but more with love. (1.1.164-168)


    Analysis: In Act 1,Scene 1, Romeo shares these lines to Benvolio. Romeo is going through a very rough time due to him seeing that everything does not always go the way he assumes it will. The meaning of this statement expresses the love and passion he has towards a girl. The girl he loves if named Rosaline who is a beautiful young women who is sworn to live life within a chastity. The trick about this is that Rosaline does not love Romeo back due to what he is (a Montague) and etc. The lines within the quote for this dialectical journal is stating that love is unpredictable, but it always ends up making you do whatever it takes to get that one person rather if is a friendship or a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship. People will probably hate you no matter what choice you make, but everyone has to let that go and worry about themselves as well as what will help them out in the long run. If you are happy with the person you love and what you wake up to, do not let anyone judge you by that and if they do, let them go. (198)





    Lexi Bourgeois
    English 1-5th Period 2nd DJ
    Wade Rodrigue
    5 November 2013


    My only love sprung from my only hate!
    Too early seen unknown, and known too late!
    Prodigious birth of love it is to me,
    That I must love a loathed enemy.(1.5.136-139)

    Analysis: After kissing twice in Act 1, Scene 5, Juliet is surprised by who she kissed and talks to her Nurse about everything going on. The Nurse has informed her that the young boy she just kissed was Romeo who was a Montague. Juliet is a Capulet which means both Romeo and Juliet are enemies within one another. She knew that this was a bad start between her and Romeo as well as the disappointment of not marrying Paris who is the man her father approved she may marry. At this point, she does not know what to do which is why she is approaching her Nurse that has been there for her ever since she was born. Although she loves him, will they continue to see each other? What is Romeo thinking as well once he found out Juliet was the daughter of Lady of Capulet and Capulet? Will her love last for him or will she give up? (159)

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    1. Why isn't this under the Act I thread?

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    2. Great job, Lexi! You went into detail and explained the quotes which gave a wonderful analysis. I like it! :)

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    3. Good job explaining it in the best way for everyone to understand.

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    4. Great job! you put a lot of detail in.

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  2. Destiny Hotard
    English I, 5th
    Rodrigue
    5, November 2013

    Well, in that hit you miss: she'll not be hit
    With Cupid's arrow; she hath Dian's wit,
    And in strong proof of chastity well arm'd,
    From love's weak childish bow she lives uncharm'd. (1.1.199-203)

    Romeo speaks these lines as a description on how he sees his love while he's depressed. He thinks of love as bad luck for him. He says Cupid's arrow hit him but seems to have missed Rosaline completely as she does not love Romeo back. 'She hath Dian's wit' is comparing her to the goddess Diana, who remained a virgin much like Rosaline. She is uncharmed by Romeo because she doesn't love him. He sees this as her refusing to be hit by Cupid's arrow. Rosaline has vowed to stay a virgin and, therefore, does not love Romeo. Romeo explains this saying that she'll never be fooled by childish arrows of love so he has no chance with Rosaline. He believe that Cupid just simply doesn't want Rosaline to love Romeo or anyone because she is too intelligent to be fooled by a such thing like love and shall remain a virgin all her life. (155 words)


    Oh, she doth teach the torches to burn bright!
    It seems she hangs upon the cheek of night
    Like a rich jewel in an Ethiope’s ear,
    Beauty too rich for use, for earth too dear.
    So shows a snowy dove trooping with crows
    As yonder lady o'er her fellows shows.
    The measure done, I’ll watch her place of stand,
    And, touching hers, make blessèd my rude hand.
    Did my heart love till now? Forswear it, sight!
    For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night. (1.5.42-51)

    This is spoken by Romeo when he first sets his eyes on Juliet. He forgets everything about Rosaline, mesmerized by Juliet's beauty. He compares her to a torch, burning bright because her beauty makes her stand out. He thinks of her as a rich jewel, as she is the most beautiful girl in all of Verona. He says she would be a snowy dove in a group of crows because her beauty stands out. He thinks of her as a lady, expressing this by saying his hand is rude compared to hers. He forgets his love for Rosaline and falls madly in love with Juliet, saying his eyes lied to him, making him think Rosaline was more beautiful than any other girl. This is proven wrong the first time he lays eyes on Juliet. He sees her beauty as the greatest in the land, not believing that he could ever have thought of Rosaline as beautiful. He explains Juliet as too beautiful to die and be buried, for her beauty will not die with her as Rosaline's will. (177 words)

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    1. D'Andrea Smith
      English l, 2nd
      Rodrigue
      5, November 2013

      Original Version:
      What say you? Can you love the gentlemen?
      This night you shall behold him at our feast.
      Read o'er the volume of young Paris' face
      And find delight writ there with beauty's pen.
      Examine every married lineament
      And see how one another lends content,
      And what obscured in this fair volume lies
      Find written in the margin of his eyes.
      This precious book of love , this unbound lover,
      To beautify him only lacks a cover.
      The fish lives in the sea, and 'tis much pride
      For fair without the fair within to hide.
      That book in many's eyes doth share the glory
      That in gold clasps locks in the golden story.
      So shall you share all that he doth possess
      By having him making yourself no less.
      ( 1.3 80-96)

      This quote is spoke by Lady Capulet when she tells Juliet about Paris. In this quote Lady Capulet wants Juliet to like Paris. She suggests her that when she go to the feast she can see Paris and just start to like him. She knows that Juliet does not know the boy, but she still want her to married him. She wanted her to examine every line of his features, so I'm guessing that she wants her to really look at how handsome he really is. Then, she says that If Juliet was confused to look in his eyes. She would be confused because she doesn't want to be married and would want to see why her mother likes him too much. (Translation Version) Many people think he's handsome, and whoever becomes his bride will be just as admired. You would share all that he possesses, and by having him, you would lose nothing." Lady Capulet wanted Juliet to know that he's handsome and that whoever he would married be just admired. Whatever Paris have would be all for Juliet (if she marries him). By marrying him that she wouldn't lose anything. Lady Capulet want her daughter to eagerly married Paris. But Juliet knows that she's too young and don't want to be married at all.

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    2. Why isn't this under the Act I thread?

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  3. Kayla Webre
    English 1-2nd period
    Rodrigue
    5 November 2013

    "Is love really tender? I think it's too rough, too rowdy, and it pricks like a thorn."


    Analysis: This quote is from Act 1, Scene 4. Romeo is heart broken. He is out of love, dwelling on Rosaline. Romeo thinks that Rosaline was the most beautiful girl he has ever seen. Mercutio is trying to give him advice, saying if love plays rough with you, you play rough with it. Mercutio is convincing Romeo to go to this masqued ball, and search for love, so he can soon move on from Rosaline. Romeo is debating it, its like he is scared of love. He is scared to fall for someone and not have them love him back.He is judging the feeling of love, off of one heart break. He is questioning, is it really all what they say it is? He thinks its too much. He thinks it "pricks you like a thorn" meaning it can hurt you. He thinks its too rough, too rude, because he got rejected. He loves someone who does not love him hack. Therefore, he is stuck on this opinion of love, he is questioning it. (179)

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  4. D'Andrea Smith
    English l, 2nd
    Rodrigue
    5, November 2013

    Translation Quote: " I'm not myself. I'm not here. This isn't Romeo-he's somewhere else." (1.1 192)

    This quote was said by Romeo. Romeo thinks he's not his self because of love. The woman he love doesn't love him back. He's depressed because love got his head messed up. Now, he thinks that he's not his self. When he says this he's talking to Benvolio who cries with him because of how sad Romeo is. Although he's depressed with love he talks it with Benvolio (his friend) and Benvolio tells him that it has other fishes in the sea and don't just be sad because of this one girl. Then, Romeo talks about her beauty. So, Romeo doesn't feel his self because he think that the girl would never love him back. In this quote, its a strong quote but it really expresses how Romeo really feels about the girl he loves ( just in different words). The quote is strong enough to show a lot of emotions about how Romeo feels.

    Quote 1: 216 words / Quote 2: 155 words

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  5. Terryneker Johnlouis
    English1,5th
    Rodrigue
    6 November,2013
    1st Dialectical Journal
    Act 1 .5 lines 225"By giving liberty to thine eyes;examine other beauties."
    What this is saying that put your eyes on something else. When Romeo was telling Benvolio about how he felt and why he was feeling this way Benvolio was like get over yourself there are bigger and better things out there. Benvolio was telling Romeo to put your eyes on some other women and leave the one that doesn't love you alone.What Benvolio was trying to do make Romeo in some type of way happy.

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  6. Terryneker Johnlouis
    English 1 5th
    Rodridue
    6November.2013
    2nd Dialectical Journal
    Act1.1 lines165
    "Alas that love, so gentle in his view, should be tyrannous and rough in proof." This was said by Benvolio. Benvolio meant that how sweet it is to see something so beautiful in sight, but when you experience it it's not to sweet as you thought it was. As when you saw that beautiful sight and when you find out there is no love then what will you do. Also , what Benvolio was trying to say was everything that you see isn't good meaning everything won't love you the same way that you love it.

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  7. Hayze Talbot
    English1-5th
    W. Rodrigue
    6 November 2013

    "Did my heart love till now? Foreswear it, sight! For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night." - Romeo

    When Romeo spoke these words it was after he saw Juliet. He states he has never seen such beauty and he falls I love immediately. Romeo now believes his heart has lied to him, for he has just suddenly gotten over Roselawn. Roeslawn did not love Romeo as Romeo loved her, this made Romeo depressed. Romeo did not want to do anything, until he met Juliet. He feels as if he does not know why he fell for Roselawn when there is much more beauty right in front of him. Romeo becomes determined to be with Juliet and forgets all about Roselawn.


    "Tell me daughter Juliet , how stands your deposition to be married?" - Lady Capulet

    Juliet had never thought of being married. She was only thirteen after all. Juliet I believe did not want to marry, but only did so because her parents wished for it. She was not ready for marriage it seems, but she went through with it to make everyone happy. When Juliet went to the ball she then realized she was ready for marriage just not to the person she was already married to. She had fallen in love with Romeo but could not do anything about it being she was married.

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  8. Chance Hepola
    Rodrigue
    English 1
    6 November 2013

    "No-as they dare,I'll thumb my nose at them. That will insult them, if they notice it."

    This quote is found in Act 1, Scene 1. Sampson is the one who says this. He is a servant in the story. Thumbing your nose is a sign of disrespect or hatred towards another person. He is doing this towards Abraham. Abraham is a person from the enemy house. This quote says a lot. Mainly the disrespect and hatred they have for each other. It really shows who Sampson is. It shows how disrespectful he is towards others. Also, you could consider him an instigator. It seems he was causing trouble with this. It just shows he is a disrespectful individual.

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  9. Ashley Conrad
    Mr. W. Rodrigue
    English
    2nd Period
    November 6, 2013


    Dialectical Journals
    (Act 1)


    “Yes, this is what love does. My sadness sits heavy in my chest, and you want to add your own sadness to mine so there’s even more. I have too much sadness already, and now you’re going to make me sadder by feeling sorry for you. Here’s what love is: a smoke made out of lovers' sighs. When the smoke clears, love is a fire burning in your lover’s eyes. If you frustrate love, you get an ocean made out of lovers' tears. What else is love? It’s a wise form of madness. It’s a sweet lozenge that you choke on. Goodbye, cousin.”

    This quote was said by Romeo. (Can be found in Act 1, Scene 1, page 10.*online version only*) In my honest opinion, I absolutely love this quote. I think that not just because it relates to today's teenage love, but it is also so cute and romantic with a little tragedy. He clearly identifies the problem with young love and how and why it breaks us apart. I can relate so much to this quote because no one likes me. This quote doesn't just mean that teenage love can be heart breaking. It explains that no matter what you do or how much you love someone, they could not have the same feelings and totally be creeped out. In a professional term of thinking, maybe you worked all night on an article for your boss and do everything above and beyond for him, then he fires you. It wouldn’t be too fair, but its life and it also takes two to agree on a decision of opinion. If you wanted to make your boss happy, then you're making him happy by letting him fire you. Overall this quote is relatable to just about every reader, which is why I love it so much.




    “Good pilgrim, you don’t give your hand enough credit. By holding my hand you show polite devotion. After all, pilgrims touch the hands of statues of saints. Holding one palm against another is like a kiss.”

    This quote was said by Juliet in Act 1 Scene 5. This quote is very interesting. I think this because, while Romeo acts sooth and tries to win a kiss from Juliet, she knows she can not fall in love or kill him, for she will marry Paris. She turns him down, but even I could see she wanted to kiss him. I think that she only told him no with an attitude was so so could tell her self no at the same time. I find Juliet is very playful and just a young girl with lots of responsibility to follow what her parents what her to do with her life.This quote also relates to me because I hate when guys think that they are so cool and can get what they want just because they can “talk the talk” or they think they are “the cats meow.” OBVIOUSLY THEY ARE NOT, but in the end if a guy is nice enough and says the right things a girl gives in because we are “weak.” Overall, I find this quote very interesting because I like Juliet and Romeos reactions to each other. Its quite amusing to read what us teenagers sound like when we flirt with each other.




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    1. I like your analysis, Ashley! I love how you went into detail and related it to real life situations. Great job! :)

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    2. Good job, I like how you put your opinion in it.

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  10. Ashley great job! I like how you explained it in life situations like Destiny said. Good.Good.

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